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Friday 17 August 2018

Narrative writing



One day me and my friends called Eva,jane,and oalii went for a walk to the park. In the park we saw a map in 1870 it was a hunt.



Then someone was creeping to us it looked like we are getting robbed. Then we ran because we had the map then there was a box full of money.



Then eva took off the money then there was dynamite inside then me and eva and jane and oalii was like wow.




Then the robbers were trying to kidnap us then we saw some real gold.




Then it was time to enjoy the fun that we had on a hunt in 1870 so the clue said in the beach there is a sign somewhere in the water or the sand you have to swim if you want to find the clue.




Tomorrow you have to swim before you get kidnap.  

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