Wednesday, 6 June 2018

Ako 3

Once upon a time there were animals in a farm.  My characters are poppy,juliet,and jeff we were going to the farm to see all of the animals.There were drinking in one bucket but there was one camela and two Chicken and one cow .We feed them and we went to go to the barn to get all of the animals to go to sleep.Then we went back home so we can go there Tomorrow.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sivaenah, my name is Aimee and I go to Grey Main School.

    I like the way you have used ONCE UPON A TIME as your starter and I like the way you have used pictures.

    Maybe next time you could use paragraphs and make your story a little bit longer.

    This reminds me of when my sister and I shared a bedroom and she always made me read her a bedtime story.

    From Aimee


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