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Thursday 2 September 2021

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 State your Opinion: Wonder Women is the ideal of a girl with power and strength.She is as strong and courageous as any women, she has earned the respect of being a hero and being good to people around the world.Wonder Women is a hero because...

Reason 1: Wonder Women has stood for nearly eighty years as a symbol of truth.


Reason 2: Wonder Women can’t beat superman because Superman has another savage of things that’s stronger than Wonder Women.


Reason 3: Women Women has 

powers of helping others around the world like her motivation shows everyone who can save the world.


2 comments:

  1. Hey Sivaenah,

    I love the character you choose for your piece of writing. The start really gave a good description of super woman and a good strong start. You reasons were really good as well. Keep it up!

    Kind Regards: Deborah :)

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  2. Talofa lava Sivaenah I love your reasons for your persuasive writing!. It was really good. Maybe next time you can add in some fact's to back up your reasons, other then that your writing was really good mostly your start writing.

    Kind Regards: Zoe !

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