Show Not Tell
Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence: On a tribble day there was people beside me shivering in the wind and in the cold. The wind blew my face and it made my whole face cold.
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: On a sunny day there was people beside me and at the back of me playing volleyball and hitting my face so hard.
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: When this girl bought her shoes herself with her own money but her dad broke it.
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