Friday, 9 August 2019
Show Not Tell
Show Not Tell
Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence: On a tribble day there was people beside me shivering in the wind and in the cold. The wind blew my face and it made my whole face cold.
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: On a sunny day there was people beside me and at the back of me playing volleyball and hitting my face so hard.
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: When this girl bought her shoes herself with her own money but her dad broke it.
Thursday, 1 August 2019
Letter to Myself
Talofa Lava, my name is Sivaenah and I go to Pt England School. I am looking forward to being a good leader and a great person in my class. My goal is to get 200 posts in my blog and learn my times table. At the end of the year I would like to know I have become a better person by listening to the teacher and mostly my family. I am looking forward to getting a prize at the end of the year and to have a better attitude. My other goals to achieve by the end of the year is to learn as much as I can to help me for next year. When I am at the playground or anywhere I treat everyone with respect and be kind to others, this is something I would love to keep for the rest of my life and never change.
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