I am a Year 7 learner in Room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand.
Thursday, 22 November 2018
Writing
This is my story about this photo to think about the story.
Once upon a time me and my friends called Andi mack and julianne went to this mysterious tunnel.When me and my friends were walking through the mysterious tunnel there was this old dusty and crusty house.It looked like it was a earthquake under it and there was mountains that were down in the bottom be low the old dusty and crusty house.Then andi mack said look at the mountains they have snow and ice to it.Then julianne said can you see the clouds it looks like it was dark chocolate clouds but it is almost night time and then that means that can we sleep here they said and then andi mack said this is wonderful and then julianne said look at the old dusty and crusty house it has old dusty gears in it but it is time for to sleep then we all said this was the best day ever.
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